Workshop Critique for Jenna Belkin (II) 1. a) This paper has good utilization of the MLA format. The margins are correct as well as the title and heading. It is double-spaced throughout and very clear. b) With the exception of the cite on page one, which needs a space, the author is consistent in using proper parenthetical documentation throughout the paper. c) The works cited page is almost perfect except for a couple small underlining details. …showed first 75 words of 290 total…

…showed last 75 words of 290 total…to the next. 4. The conclusion does a good job of wrapping up the paper. It repeats the author's main points and finishes with a statement about where we are heading. 5. This is a very well written paper. It makes good use of the MLA format, has lots of quotes for evidence and is very readable. This paper can be improved by revising it one more time for grammar and spelling and by strengthening the conclusion.