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…showed last 75 words of 1723 total…what they had just seen. To conclude, my stylistic and narrative changes are coherent and viable but there would always be a risk of filling the mise en scene with "directorial masturbation". Through the use of advanced techniques and tricks you gain technological praise but at what price? Too many distractions can take the focus from the narrative and therefore remove or alienate the audience from the intended aims of the original storyline. Word Count 1650